Monday, May 28, 2012

Re-write Task 2


Children nowadays show many intelligent things like solving hard puzzles or count large numbers. They can also cooperate to solve many things. I am going to write about children who compete or cooperate.

Sense of competition could give the child creativity, for example, children who want to be the best try to show unique work because of competition, Secondly, competition could make enemies between children, for instance, children sometimes want to be the best among other children their age, but children with high skills could be hated because they are always the best. Finally, competition can make brain storm, as an example, competition could make children share their ideas that are useful to them.

Competition can lead to many useful things and cooperative can also lead to many great things. For starters, work can be less hard, for example, sharing work can make it a lot easier in groups. Finally, cooperative can make child have more friends, for instance, children who work together can make them more social in the future when they become adults.

In a nutshell, competition and cooperative could both lead to many useful things depending on the children. If they were not friendly to each other then it is better to work in a group.


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