Wednesday, March 7, 2012

Re-write Task 1




    Disasters and violence can change people, by make them understand or increase their awareness on what is happening around them, I’m going to write about the effect on individuals and society.

     Let’s begin in the individuals, for starters, some individuals may learn from the causes, for example, knowing the reason behind this violence or disaster and learn how to avoid it. Next, Volunteer, for instance, some people may volunteer to the country that effected by disasters or violence. Finally, awareness, for example, increase awareness to the individual by TV channels that shows the violence or disasters.
     Let’s turn our attention on the society, for starters, society may sent an aid, for instance, society may help neighbor country by sending food if they were lack of food or money if they had a bad economy issue.
  
    In a nutshell, spreading information around the world might be a good thing to spread awareness, not only that it may change people life.

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